日常英会話特訓中

日常英会話力を鍛えるためにパートナーSと英語特訓中です。

After the acupuncture treatment, I went to a thrift shop that I have never been to before.

The shop was splendid, it really carried a lot of kinds ofcarried a wide variety of good quality stuffthings with reasonable prices!

【"Really" is not needed here. To say "carried a "lot" of things is already emphasizing so many things.This needed to be rephrased, and also, to native speakers 'stuff' often refers to, lesser quality things. But, it is ok to use because you prefaced that with "good quality". However "things" just sounds better than "stuff". We usually refer to stuff as what we find at places like yard sales.】

For instance, I got a juicer, that I had wanted for a long time because I love fresh fruit juice, withfor only 990yen! If I buy new same one, it will cost 8,000yen.

If I bought this new, it would cost 8,000yen.

If I buy the same one new, it would cost 8,000yen.

Besides,Besides that, I bought a desk telephone, that I also had desired for a long while, by 8,000yen. Of course it has fax function, an extension and is manufactured by SHARP.

I really took a fancy to this shop, so shortly I will go there to sell my unnecessary clothes that I can't wear anymore due to being fat!